Angeliq sail & flag designs

[Angeliq Delahaye]

http://www.burningsea.com/pages/page.php?pageKey=uc/viewItem&item_id=39220

http://www.burningsea.com/pages/page.php?pageKey=uc/viewItem&item_id=39175

http://www.burningsea.com/pages/page.php?pageKey=uc/viewItem&item_id=39533

http://www.burningsea.com/pages/page.php?pageKey=uc/viewItem&item_id=39304

http://www.burningsea.com/pages/page.php?pageKey=uc/viewItem&item_id=39531

Can someone tell me if there is something wrong with these... i appriciate.

coz they are getting rejected and i really wanna use them :(

[Sadet]

If you can attach a copy of your designs with your post instead of links, I think you'll get a better response.

[Elvaron]

I think the sail one white-on-transparent background is looking fine from a technical PoV, on it's colored counter-part, I believe the colors are too pure.

That other sail, try making it flat single-color white filled flames with 50% transparency instead, and a less saturated version of the weapon :)

The flag with the same weapon has some tribal-looking things on it, which is usually not wanted. The angel wings on the other one should be fine if you make the colors more fitting.

Don't give up yet, you might have to reshape some things, but you'll eventually get there. Try attaching to your reply post the images you have created using these comments before submitting so others can tell you whether you have reached the point of almost certain approval(which is the best we can guarantee).