Society Sail

[12onin]

I have had sails approved & a lot more rejected for whatever reasons. I am working on a sail for my society and would like some pointers. Please take a look at this one and let me know what you guys think. Thanks.

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[Sadet]

Nice design, I'd suggest making it a bit smaller to keep it from crowding the edges of the sail. You might try making the skulls eyes and nose a darker color so they show up a little better.:yar:

[lucynsky]

gradient by the point? not sure, but it would be dev hammer bait. :/

[Morgan Lacerda]

i agree with Sadet.
The design looks awesome but try putting a darker color on the eyes

[12onin]

Thank you very much guys. I will work on the eyes & nose when I have time. Appreciate all the inputs.

[Marion vanGhent]

While this is a fine basic idea for a sail decal, I've been advised that it's too close to several Warhammer 40K logos, and we've had to remove it from voting. Apologies!

If you can find a different sword, skull, and especially wings to use, you should be able to come up with a similar design that's less Warhammer-specific. I recommend looking through the Wikimedia Commons (http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Main_Page) for public-domain or otherwise unrestricted cliipart to use.

Again, apologies for the inconvenience.

[Sadet]

Here are some more specific Wikimedia Commons artwork you might be able to use to recreate this design to come up with something that is unique!

http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Category:Wings_in_heraldry
http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Image:Blason_ville_fr_Ales_(Gard).svg
http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Image:Pirate_Flag_of_Stede_Bonnet.svg
http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/Category:Swords_in_heraldry

[12onin]

Appreciate all the help and pointing to the right direction. Time to go back to drawing board again. Thanks everyone.