Pirate Magazine

[JakeLankster]

Tell me your opinion to be better.
Item details: Pirates Time by J.L
http://www.yudu.com/item/details/94781/P.

[Josh_Brown]

Looks like you had a few places where what should have been paragraph headers were merged into the general text. Also, some notes on the soruces for quotes and the like would be good.

On the whole, though, it looks good!

[JakeLankster]

Thanks a lot Josh, for your advices.I will follow them.